My Poems [for the extravaganza contest]

Started by Nadaz, voice of the host, November 23, 2017, 04:06:02 PM

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Nadaz, voice of the host

The golden sun sets across the western plain in a clear sky free from wind and rain, the Joeseph bell is tolling, the casks of October ale are rolling, come, come all you creatures and beasts for Redwall is having a feast!
It matters not what you fight, but what you fight for.

Captain Tammo

Nice job, Nadaz! The poem has a nice charm to it.
"Cowards die a thousand times, a warrior only dies once. The spirits of all you have slain are watching you, Vilu Daskar, and they will rest in peace now that your time has come. You must die as you have lived, a coward to the last!" -Luke the warrior

Rosie Willowwater

This is awesome, Nadaz! It really captures the atmosphere in one short sentence. Well done!